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Post by ToZiKa on Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:30 am

Welcome at the ABY WhenInRome!
I guess you are one of the room mates?
I hope you have fun around here!

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Post by WhenInRome on Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:50 am

yes, and thank you so very much, im sam.

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Post by BrainySmurf0302 on Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:46 am

Yayyy!!! Samma's on the ABY! Welcome, welcome, welcome! (Notice how I do this as I am across the couch from you. sad, really. Very Happy )
I wanted to say a late thank you for all of the welcomes I have gotten. Here, I do feel very welcome. You'll soon learn that Samantha is just as much of a Bonehead as we are. I feel so proud. Introduced it to her, now we share the disease ( the best disease you could ever wish for)! And, unfortunately, Claire can't stomach the dead bodies. She's more of a gossip girl type ( I honestly dislike those types of shows, no offence intended, forensics full steam ahead!!!).
Anyways, I'm sorry to say that there will only be a half of a chapter tonight. I'm starting to feel sickish again. Hopefully my boyfriend will bring over some soup Very Happy Yummy ( the soup,not the BF [well...], wiseguys).
~sunny~

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Post by ToZiKa on Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:25 am

you know, I just now realized that I didn't actually review the last chapter.....

sorry

well I liked it and I can't wait for them to have that talk about dreams....
just one thing, not sure, if it was just a one-time thing either
but his name is Seeley not Seely, I know that a lot peeps on ff.net use seely, but that's just wrong

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Post by BrainySmurf0302 on Sat Oct 24, 2009 9:02 pm

sorry i haven't posted... i was really sick. I think mebbe it was my sinuses. it's going around. A post tonight, i promise.I'm feeling muchhh better Very Happy I'll change it to Seeley. Not Seely. I just saw that alot in other fanfics. actually, Seeley makes more sense. Thanks! They will have that talk about dreams... hehehe. Wink

~ sunny ~ -Sunnie-

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Post by Laffers18 on Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:27 am

Just read this, v.v.v. good. Looking forward to more

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New Chapter!!!! #4, rated M for SMUT!

Post by BrainySmurf0302 on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:46 am

Thanks Dylan, ToZiKa ( tony ziva kate?? maybe idk)! I loveee it when you peeps comment. It motivates me as a writer. Wink Anyways, here's the chapter you've all been waiting for. Sorry it took me so long to post, i just couldn't seem to get it right, but this I think is muchhh better than the ones I've been writing this weekend. Nothing but the best for you people Very Happy Here it goes.... \

That's What Friends Are For - by BrainySmurf0302
note: this chapter is rated M...

Chapter Four: What's for Breakfast? Confessions.*****Booth POV******

I opened my eyes, surveying the scene before me. The covers were in disarray, my shirt was thrown in a corner somewhere, and the door to her bedroom was closed. Oh, yeah, Bones. She was lying practically on top of me, sound asleep. I was on my back, and her head was on my chest. Bones' long, elegant legs were tangled with mine. She shifted, and I stifled a small groan as she moved against my, um, more sensitive parts. Not like she was hurting me or anything. Actually, much the opposite. I drew in a breath and thought about how I was going to get her off of me without waking her. I gently removed my legs from hers and shifted her upper body back onto the bed. The process took several minutes. Finally, I was able to sit up and take a look at her. Her auburn hair was spread across the pillow, framing her head and shoulders. Bones looked so peaceful when she was asleep. I knew she would not look like this when she woke up. It was almost as if sleep erased all of the worries of the day off of her face. My gaze traveled away from her face and to her body. Her bottoms hung low on her hips and her stomach was exposed from her cami bunching up from the night. I drew in a breath as a feeling overtook me. This feeling was what I confessed at every mass: lust for my partner. I had fantasized about her many times, and seeing her had brought that feeling back, except this time it was real. I reached a hand out to brush across her exposed back before I realized what I was doing. My fingers traced thier way down her spine. Her skin is so soft. I was brought back to my senses when she shuddered, although she was still asleep. Repentant, I pulled her cami back down to cover her stomach and back. I got up and walked across the room, putting my shirt back on and walking out of the room. I would have to be more careful.

*****Brennan POV***************************

Mmmm. The smell of cooking, savory food, is what I woke to. Booth must have gotten up to make breakfast. I was a bit disappointed, I had wanted to wake up first and see him sleeping next to me. I had fantasized about him before, but that would have been the...what is the saying?...piece on the cake? I quickly sat up and quietly hopped out of bed. I remembered what I was going to tell him. But first, the bathroom. My bladder felt like it was about to explode. I tripped going into the bathroom, landing hard on my knees and palms. Owwwdammitmotherof...oww. I heard footsteps behind me, and scrambled to get up.
"Are you okay?" he asked me, with an amused look on his face. He was wearing his shirt now.
"Well, nothing's broken, although it will probably bruise pretty badly later." I replied.
He laughed. " A simple yes would do, Bones. Breakfast is almost ready."
Booth turned around and went back down the hallway to the kitchen. I finished in the bathroom and walked down the hall. I was thinking about my dream as I walked into the kitchen (probably NOT the best idea). Booth was already chowing down on the eggs and toast he had made. I sat down across from him silently and started filling my plate. He looked up.
"Do you want to talk about it?" he questioned.
I got temporarily lost in his warm brown eyes before I could muster the power of speech.
"They were about you." I whispered.
He put down his fork and gave his full attention to me.
"They?" he inquired, a confused look on his face.
"The first one was... horrible. You had left me, and I was all by myself. I tried to find you, but you weren't anywhere." I elaborated.
Booth reached across the table and gave my hand a squeeze that set my heart racing.
"Bones, I would NEVER leave you. Not in a million years." He stated.
I smiled, a little bit nervous, but reassured. I played with his fingers, which seemed to surprise him.
"The second one was MUCH better, though." I raised my eyebrow, still grinning to imply what I meant.
His stare got very intense, and he studied my face. Booth slowly took his hand out of mine and lifted it up to rest against my cheek. I drew in a breath. This was going much better than I had planned.
"Like this?" he whispered.
"Yes, but more." I whispered back, leaning across the table, giving him a good look at my chest. I gently pressed my lips against his and pulled back, looking at his face. Booth's eyes darkened with what could only be desire.
We both stood up at the same time and I gasped as he pushed me up against the counter, his mouth closing over mine. I opened my mouth and let out a small moan as he put one hand in my hair and the other on my ass. Hot damn. This man knew what I liked. My hands were already removing his shirt as we sank to the ground. His toungue slipped into my open mouth and deepened the kiss. My back was against the cool floor as he got on top of me. Booth stopped for a second and looked at me as if asking for permission. A little noise of dissapointment from me was all it took as he leaned down and sprinkled kisses down my neck. I reached down and pulled my cami over my head. I pressed my chest against his, and he ran his hands over my now completely uncovered waist, stomach, and breasts. He shuddered and drew the nipples into his mouth one at a time, making me whimper.
"Oh God." I whispered.
I could feel the warmth spread through my body as he pressed his whole body against me, his lips now on mine. I was slightly confused. Wasn't it a bit early?
Apparently not. My body felt like it was on fire as I came, my back arching and un arching as a loud moan escaped my lips. An amused smile played on Booth's lips as he pulled back, watching me.
"Did you really just...?" he started, a grin still wide on his face.
As the intensity faded enough that I could form a coherent thought, I answered, looking uncertainly up at him.
"Yeah..." I answered his unfinished question, somewhat embarassed. My pants weren't even off yet.
"So you were that turned on, huh? Let me show you what you do to me." he growled. Was it possible for him to make me more horny than I already was? Yes. He removed his pants and boxers in one quick motion. In another second my bottoms were off, too. He started to lean back down to start kissing me again, but I caught him by surprise and flipped him back onto his back, me on top of him now. He sighed with displeasure. I dropped a kiss on his lips and settled myself onto his hard arousal, grinding against him. He groaned and tryed to pull me down but I remained where I was. I held up a finger to his lips.
"Bed. Now." I commanded.
His breath quickened and I could see he was already close to coming, my hips still against him. He obviously likes my assertive side... I didn't even get to finish that thought as he quickly stood and lifted me over his shoulder, heading towards the bedroom. The door shut behind us, and we settled onto the bed, leaving two plates of cold toast and eggs behind in the kitchen.
***********end chapter four*************
SOooo. Comments? Questions? You likey? I'm not in much practice writing smut, hopefully that was okay Smile Chapter five will come tomorrow or tuesday. Yay!!!!
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Post by ReginaPhalange on Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:09 pm

Geez!!!

* faints*

Love it! Just...love it. Chapter 5 is where?!?!?!

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Post by ToZiKa on Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:11 pm

You got that right Sunnie
ToZiKa stands for TonyZivaKate......it's an old name though....I don't really like Kate anymore.......but everyone around here just calls me Toz anyway.

Hmmmm hot........and steamy........and nice......
I was just wondering why she fell.....maybe we'll get back to that later.....or was it just 'for fun'?
Can't wait for more!

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Post by WhenInRome on Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:32 am

Amazing, sweetie. Write/ Type more!!!!!

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Post by Laffers18 on Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:41 am

Mmmmmm.......v.hot. Look forward to more!

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Post by BrainySmurf0302 on Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:05 am

Thanks peoples! Very Happy Now to reply to you awesome commenters:
Regina-*catches before she hits the floor* Chapter five is coming very soon, today or tomorrow. keep an eye out! Smile
Toz- I don't really like Kate much anymore either. Things are muchh hotter between Tony and Ziva anywhoo. Wink And the falling thing at the moment I was writing it was Just for fun, but it could develop into something else, who knows? I don't know what I'll do with it but it MIGHT become something...
Wheninrome/Samma- Thank you. just so everybody knows she has a fanfic of her own and is trying to decide whether or not to post it. Its a long one, I think she has like 86 pages already?
Dylan- Thanks Very Happy more soon.
Okey Dokey folks, I have a paper to finish. If I post the chapter tonight, it will be later. Thanks for all the support <3 !
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sunny sunny SUnnie!!!~

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Post by WhenInRome on Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:29 am

Sweetie, youre the one telling me that my character has too many problems. It will take a while to fix that. Hehe.
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Post by BrainySmurf0302 on Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:23 am

Ahhhh OHHHHHHHHH MMMMYYY GOD YOU GUYS HAVE NO CLUE HOW FRUSTRATED I WAS!! (AMM) The BEAUTIFUL CHAPETER FIVE I WORKED ON LAST NIGHT AND FINISHED, IT DIDN't POST BECAUSE THE STUPID COMPUTER DECIDED TO SHUT THE PROGRAMS OFF AND RUN A SCAN AHHHHH!!!!
*SCREAMS INTO A PILLOW**********************
*gasp*
*SCREAM**********
*breathing heavily*
GRR!!!!! aHhh my god... that is fricking ridiculous. Well, I guess I'll write it again. *sighs dejectedly* I need some moral support.

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Post by WhenInRome on Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:52 am

Oh dearest friend, will you please write more? It would mean the world o me.
Your humble servant, second only to the empress,
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