The End of the Line
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Re: The End of the Line
"itty bitty love story" ... no way! It was a wonderful love story. You never spared me (or Booth) for a minute; he was tormented for the entire evening!
The "Don't wait five more years to propose." was perfect!
And thanks for connecting the dots on Max's "alone at Christmas" bit and her inviting Booth to dinner. It felt a little off to me that she brought it up during the evidence removal, but knowing that she had to be getting aroused during the whole thing too, now it especially fits in that scene!
Loved it!
The "Don't wait five more years to propose." was perfect!
And thanks for connecting the dots on Max's "alone at Christmas" bit and her inviting Booth to dinner. It felt a little off to me that she brought it up during the evidence removal, but knowing that she had to be getting aroused during the whole thing too, now it especially fits in that scene!
Loved it!

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Re: The End of the Line
Enjoyed the story, Gum. But you should have added a spoiler warning to the note. Some of us have to download the episode over the internet and still have only 78% of the episode.

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Thanks =)
Awwwww I really do love the fanfic's where the relationship comes to a head like this and they just are. Things are spatted out during a stressful scene or a fight, he's not throwing her up against a wall and declaring his love in the middle of sex, it just flows with the discussion and that's how I think it should happen on the show.
Oh and I wanted to add that anything you write is amazing =)
P.S. Thanks for shooting me the link to the Aby website. I'm having a blast here!
Oh and I wanted to add that anything you write is amazing =)
P.S. Thanks for shooting me the link to the Aby website. I'm having a blast here!
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Re: The End of the Line
great story, absolutely brilliant!

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